I really enjoyed it!
I don't really know how you would go about making it better but I do have a question for you.
What are the vocals from? They seem somewhat familiar to me... Oh I just found it on google, but still this is really good and the vocal integration is amazing, make more like this! AWESOME!!!
Nice, longer and more 23 - 44 stuff, please!
23 - 44 was my favorite, though that is just my personal preference, keep with that type of beat and music (uber epic techno exciting) , and you'll will have at least one rabid fan!
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